But I am taking a few moments from my schedule to piece together a Scribbles post for this past month. I hope you enjoy. I apologize in advance for the grave nature of these bits, the book itself has some rather dark moments, and I am in the midst of these in my plot.
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"'Oh, God!' He stopped and let the words rip from his heart, their meaning beyond any description—a question, a demand, an accusation, a plea for strength. He sank down to his knees, fingers anchored in his ragged hair.
His stomach flung itself about, empty and demanding, but he ignored it as his mind replayed the eerie glow of burning memories, the work of generations turned to soot."
~Valiant Promises
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"He opened his eyes, pushing aside
the hatred that had tried to anchor its sharp fingers in his mind, the hatred
that many would call merited, the hatred his flesh so longed to carry."
~Valiant Promises
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"He
walked, his eyes straight ahead, the cold enwrapping him, pouring through his
tunic and cloak.
He
hated it, in that moment.
Hated the fact that the seasons and days and stars and eternities continued on in their allotted paths.
Hated the fact that the seasons and days and stars and eternities continued on in their allotted paths.
Hated
that he was powerless in the face of so much wrong.
Hated
his own humanity."
~Valiant Promises
6 comments:
Wow, I found these snippets really good, Keaghan! They're evocative and well-written descriptions of the feelings of someone going through real trials. I loved them!
Thank you for sharing.
God bless.
~Joy
These were wonderful, Keaghan! :)
Love in Christ,
Emily
Powerful writing! Dark, yet meaningful. Love it! My favourite is the last one. :) Good writing
stopping by from the snippets linkup
No wonder you got the part of the Stage Manager. =)
~ Timothy
Great snippets, Keaghan!
I've awarded you at The Silver Key of Poetry!
http://silverkeyofpoetry.blogspot.com/2012/11/elevens-as-far-as-eye-can-see-with.html
Wow, those were really good! :)
P.S I tagged you at my blog (Scribblings of a Dreamer):http://scribblingsofadreamer1.blogspot.com/2012/11/all-about-elevensies_5708.html
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